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by Laura Hale Brockway, ELS
As writers, editors, and PR professionals, we are keenly aware that we must fight for readers’ attention. My daily sanity check is to ask, “Is someone actually going to read this?”
To help readers, I use concise language and eliminate redundancies. As Strunk and White say, “Make every word tell.”
Below are phrases in which every word does not tell. They are redundant, repetitive, wordy, verbose, and superfluous. Eliminate such phrases to tighten your writing. (Redundant words are italicized.)
• added bonus
• advance planning
•...